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forgive
Contributed by
adanawa
on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 07:58:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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I fall on my knees and beg you please
give me the chance to be the one
to love you and care for you
don’t think me to sappy for this is all true
I did see what was in front of me
a beautiful thing
love
Lord has it been a long time
since I have seen that flower
But it died
that day I left you
My breath stops every time I think of you
never to come back to me
never to be there at my front door with a card when I am sick
or in my bedroom door way
with that silly look on your face
the one that made me smile
Always waiting to hear your voice
on the other end on the line
hating the way you look at me now
know that I deserve it
wanting to kiss you so badly
to make up for the thing that I didn’t do
to make up for the horrors I put you through
I don’t want to fell this way anymore
I’ve been hurt in the past
What I thought was genuine
was nothing but a mere lie
from people I trusted
that talked about forever
I will forgive with time
But I need help
And I know I betrayed any trust
You had for me
I would do anything to earn it back
Over time I have begun to fear
That you don’t feel for me anymore
The thought has nested itself
Deep within the depth of my heart
The days I told you goodbye
Were horrible
Now every time I talk to you
I walk away and try so hard
Not to cry
As I am now
My dream deceive me
Making me think you will come back
Wishing to know if they were telling the truth
Or were just fantasy
If you will ever come back again
I will hold you till the very end
I don’t expect you to take this and go to me
I don’t expect anything at all
I just want you to know
That I would anything for you
Conquer fears for you
Give everything up for you
I love you
Copyright ©
adanawa
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2004-06-02 19:58:54]
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Re: forgive
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 08:05:23 PM AEST
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| This is an awesome poem and I hope things work out for you. |
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Re: forgive
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by nail-to-the-head on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 08:28:01 PM AEST
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very well structured and writen. hope all goes well.
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Re: forgive
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 01:14:37 AM AEST
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Great job! And none too sappy for me. Though I'm not sure about the line "Deep within the depth of my heart". Kind of repeats itself a bit needlessly.
But never mind my nitpicking. This was well done! Keep it up.
Andrew |
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