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Contributed by
jillian_f006
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Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 07:09:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I closed the door a while back
The bold is locked
And I can’t get it open
My mind I closed
And my heart’s gone cold
The pain inside is just too real
I don’t know whom to turn to
I don’t know who trust
No matter I turn
My enemy is there
She won’t go away
It just can’t be bared
She is fat and ugly
Rude and mean
Just ***** off and leave me be
These feelings are just too strong
I don’t seem to hear the things people say
I can’t sit still and
I can’t be nice
No matter what I do
If just wont be right
Help me to get this out
By reading this poem
It’s no longer a secret
I hurt a lot
And don’t know how to tell you
I can’t even explain where it’s coming from
I can’t lean on people for the rest of my life
But for now, I fear what may happen if I don’t
I thought of it before it’s not out of the question
The person I who is always there
Is none other than myself
I want to be free
I want to leave
More than all I want to be me
Copyright ©
jillian_f006
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2004-06-02 19:09:08]
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Re: no name
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 07:24:43 PM AEST
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If you want a friend I can be one, it won't be like I can come and visit you but I can share poems with you and give you a person you can share with.
"The start of a friendship some one says
You know how much i want to be one
Let our stories begin on this unwritten page
the thoughts and ideals that become us"
Quote from "The Blank Page" modified for you. |
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Re: no name
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by Trisha on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 07:29:15 PM AEST
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| Jillian I Like This Poem. It's Really Good And I Feel Your Pain. I Really Feel Your Pain Your Reaching Out For Someone. |
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Re: no name
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by mdmorash on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 07:50:57 PM AEST
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The last verse is great, not to say the rest is not, because it's all great. It's like a scream for the self.
Brilliant,
Michael |
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Re: no name
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by jillian_f006 on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 07:52:39 PM AEST
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| Awwww.... Thanks... You guys are so sweet! |
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