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The Colors of Me
Contributed by
Colleen
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Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 06:21:07 PM in AEST
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Red is my anger and fury
Clear is my tears, hiding the bad, making it blury
White is my love, pure and sweet
Yellow is my enthusiasm, someone you'd want to meet
Orange is the fire that I keep locked inside
Blue's like my own wave, always changing its tide
Green's the beauty of the earth I feel everywhere
Purple's seeing the wonders of night with someone who cares
But black is all my colors mixed in one
It can drowned out the rage of the burning sun
Black can be my comforter
It can help me see my life mature
Black is also my remorse
Knowing I'll never be able to change my life's course
Isn't it the color you see when you die
Is it the color of my life, passing me by?
Copyright ©
Colleen
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2004-06-02 18:21:07]
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Re: The Colors of Me
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by alasdaircairns on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 08:36:26 PM AEST
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| This is a classic. Will read over and over. Great write.x |
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Re: The Colors of Me
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by SweetRhythm on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 07:13:51 AM AEST
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Beautiful, you have real talent. This is another really good write. Very well thought out, I like the flow & the theme is great. Though I do just have to say one thing on your line
"Black is also my remorse, Knowing I'll never be able to change my life's course,
perhaps this is true but its always good to remember
"we can never change our past but we can always make our future"
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