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Breaking The Glass
Contributed by
TwEeK
on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 06:07:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
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shattering the looking glass
smashing it to peices
break free of this window that holds me
smash it and crash it
step upon the broken shards
watch my feet as the cut and bleed
falling apon the broken glass
crystal clearness splashed with my blood
cry streaming tears
take a shattered wedge of glass
hold it to my throut
make a slice and watch me bleed
inside this looking glass i once stayed
trapped inside and gazed upon
i was a freak
another useless freak put on for show
i would cry day and night untill my eyes burned dry
emptiness fill my soul and my heart
makeing each last day a fight with myself
people would stare as i slit my wrists with my teeth
clawed at my arms and my throut
trying so hard to break my own skin
i would scream and attack the glass
frighten the poeple beyond my cage
but now im done forever for good
i broke the barrier with all that i could
set my self free for the shortness of time
as i took my life here and crumpled and died
they helped me to my death
the poeple in my head
i had to make friends to replace the ones i never had
they filled me with pain and srrow every day
fill my head and heart with shame
shattered the looking glass
smashed it to peices
broken free of this window that used to hold me
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TwEeK
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2004-06-02 18:07:28]
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Re: Breaking The Glass
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by nail-to-the-head on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 06:12:36 PM AEST
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a very emotional poem, very heartfelt. a good write, few spelling mistakes, but they dont matter. Great! keep it up!
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Re: Breaking The Glass
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by diamond_tears on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 06:26:18 PM AEST
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| the visual images are awesome... well done!!! xx |
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Re: Breaking The Glass
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 12:48:14 PM AEST
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awesome I loved it... very disturbing and emotional just the way I like them.
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Re: Breaking The Glass
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by BaByBaNaNa on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 11:39:00 PM AEST
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| WOW! where you got that from i'd like to know. that was great. that was just so wonderful! (not what the poem was about) but the . . . wow. THE IMAGERY! i could picture it all in my mind, GREAT WRITE! |
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