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All Mest up.

Contributed by jade_elephant on Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 05:50:01 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



It started with a kiss.
Hidden in darkness.
Blending with the trend, Swathed in drunkenness,
Typified motive of misplaced friend.
Accident waiting to happen,
Isnt that fate in denial?
Knowing nothing, with Everything to reveal.
This magic motivation,
Construes there has to be more.
And Everything to be played for.

Inside on another plane.
The air buzzes, grazes my skin, reverberates along the join:
Implications DominoEd back and forth
Atmospheric exhilaration,
Amplifies this force of the dark stranger
Oozing from your every pore.
I can think of nothing more than to be away with you.
And so Escapees flee to inconspicuous haunts apparently unseen,
Selfishly creating fresh dreams
So new and exciting, so raw so inviting.

I am yours in your arms, I am me in your arms.
Twisting, melting into each other,
Becoming one against the cage
Keeping us from falling from this moment into a comatose of ecstasy…
However enticing…

Repelling unwillingly at forgotten responsibility,
Normality prevails, dreams fail,

Together separated standing side by side, together in disbelief,
Oh
March so unforgettable, as we step outside into the snow…




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Re: All Mest up. (User Rating: 1 )
by Colleen on Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 09:37:33 PM AEST
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I really liked that poem, it was very cute, and I could relate to it. I really like your ending, it was very creative!


Re: All Mest up. (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken-glass on Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 12:51:08 PM AEST
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''Knowing nothing, with Everything to reveal.''
I liked that line. This made me think, thanks for sharing, Broken-glass xxx


Re: All Mest up. (User Rating: 1 )
by dolly_dagger on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 05:40:11 PM AEST
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Love it, especially this bit: 'Blending with the trend, Swathed in drunkenness,
Typified motive of misplaced friend.' And all the lil' hidden meanings in the spellings of some words, eg. Mest, DominoEd. V. good hunny. I'm v. impressed. It's about time u spilled some of this!
Love u!
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx


Re: All Mest up. (User Rating: 1 )
by Heartfilledblood on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 06:02:03 PM AEST
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Very good poem man. Keep up the writing I liked this one a lot.




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