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Betrayed Revenge
Contributed by
nail-to-the-head
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Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 05:29:06 PM in AEST
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The promise you made to our vows of marriage
meant more to me then they did to you,
I should have guessed, I made you do it,
to find you in bed with her, my friend,
you should have known what was to come.
See, we work different to you men,
our revenge is sweet, we plan and wait.
You seem so innocent while you sleep,
but your childish face, reminds me of her,
the knife I hold, and plan to use,
stabs into your ribs, sharp twist, push harder,
your dirty blood, poors out on our sheets,
you look up at me, eyes filled, asking why.
I whisper 'I love you' as you slowly drift away,
I wipe your blood onto my white wedding dress./
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Re: Betrayed Revenge
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by eatfresh22 on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 05:32:35 PM AEST
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Vengeful poem! Awesome! I don't think that people understand the pain involved in adultery. I felt the hatred release with the stabbing of the knife. Intense.
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Re: Betrayed Revenge
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by mdmorash on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 05:39:16 PM AEST
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Brutal. Loved it. Bravo!
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Re: Betrayed Revenge
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by Trisha on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 09:20:55 PM AEST
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