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Dying

Contributed by carmen_queasy on Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 03:14:42 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Here I am you found me
Where have you gone?
Come out, come out wherever you are
Wish upon my dying star
The game is over, show yourself
Where have you gotten to?
Please will you come back to me?
Climb upon my dying tree
You’re in the swing
To and fro, to and fro
Still I can’t reach to you
To me you are beautiful
As I watch you while under this cover
You can be my dying lover
I don’t like this game anymore
I’m tired of looking for you
I don’t know you anymore
You’re unrecognisable, you’re ugly
I wish you’d go away, I wish you’d leave
Please don’t leave me, please,
I miss you more than my heart can take
My mind and brain are far apart
Tear open and torture my dying heart
I’ll die for anything, I’ll die for love
But love won’t die for me
I don’t like this game anymore
You won’t come out, you won’t find me
I’m waiting but you won’t find me
I can’t seem to find me
I'm lying here, I'm crying
You couldn't find me here, I'm dying
How long until I’m dead?
How long until this game is over
I’m dying…

Copyright Â© carmen_queasy ... [ 2004-06-02 15:14:42]
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Re: Dying (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 03:17:28 PM AEST
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this was brilliantly written, well done! I liked some of the word play as well, all together you created a very sad depressing atsmosphere and made something sad yet visually beatiful. Well done again

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