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death tracks
Contributed by
apollo
on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 03:06:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Follow to the forest, my tracks
buried deep into the canvas
to the droppings of acid
from the hymns of chirping birds
and the burrowing of the sleeping fox.
Lead yourself to the trail of death.
Copyright ©
apollo
... [
2004-06-02 15:06:05]
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Re: death tracks
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by alecfernadez on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 03:07:44 PM AEST
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| I liked this short, but very dark and very nefarious |
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Re: death tracks
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by Overstated on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 03:12:28 PM AEST
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| i agree with the other comment -0 very dark - gothic even - i like this!!!! |
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Re: death tracks
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 06:34:23 PM AEST
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Wow, I think you have a talent for getting attention, you have mines, that's for sure.
(Although I do not know if it's okay to write dark poetry as a christain) |
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Re: death tracks
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by wray on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 08:21:18 PM AEST
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| Absolutely no idea but like Archie said, captivating anyway. I think the short-length verse you use is highly appropriate for your writing style. |
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Re: death tracks
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by Avarice_Riot on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 03:37:07 AM AEST
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| Very deliciously dark and highly entertaining to read. |
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