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Only Dandelions
Contributed by
youlied
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Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 02:56:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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You are the one
In a world of weeds
With shining color
I am misplaced
In a lush garden
Dull, wilting
Only a weed
We're too alike
Look around
We're too different
They marvel at your beauty
Why do they step on me?
Hold us close, now, compare
Switch surroundings
Who's getting stepped on now?
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youlied
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2004-06-02 14:56:03]
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Re: Only Dandelions
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by Overstated on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 03:09:51 PM AEST
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| lovely idea am very jealous!! very good! |
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Re: Only Dandelions
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by alecfernadez on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 03:13:29 PM AEST
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| I liked the last line at the end, I think this poem was very well written, and congratulations for pulling of something that makes poets go green with envy |
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Re: Only Dandelions
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by alasdaircairns on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 08:39:03 PM AEST
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| Damn funny. Great write. |
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Re: Only Dandelions
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by Ina on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 01:08:26 AM AEST
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I love bitter poems!
Not so fond of stepped on dandelions.
great super. |
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