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She is charming Je líbezná
Contributed by
Aika
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Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 01:52:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Crystal water flowing through her vains,
When combs her webs in the mornings,
Soft moss dress wearing
Long leafy veil having
Bluish garland made of blueberries
With deep red cranberries laced
Every inch of her so beautiful is
Coat is weaved of fern
Her smell enchanting
You breath fast and deep
Her shine all nights and days
Golden and silver is
Washing herself with the rain
And lovely singing
Feeding her children,caring after them
Such she is, my friend, so charming
Žilami protéká křišťálová voda,
Když ráno si pročesává pavučinky
V mechových šatech oděná
Dlouhý má závoj listový
Modravé věnce z borůvčí
Proplétá rudými brusinkami
Každým coulem krásná
Kabát ozdoben kapradinami
Její vůně mámí smysly
Dýcháš rychle, zhluboka,
Její záře dnem i nocí
Zlatavá i stříbrná
Deštěm se omývá,u toho si pěje
Svá děcka krmí, opatruje
taková je….
Líbezná má přítelkyně
Copyright ©
Aika
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2004-06-02 13:52:18]
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Re: She is charming Je líbezná
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 02:26:43 PM AEST
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Oh, Aika, this is so like you......such beautiful imagery. I can see this lovely lady in my mind, and even smell or her finery. I just love your splendid poems. They are so like you.....taking care of her children. I can you see you in this one alot!
Dressed in the clothing of Nature, looking so bright and shiny!
Beautiful write Aika.
love you
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Re: She is charming Je líbezná
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by Overstated on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 02:39:11 PM AEST
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| got harder to read as it went on ;) a lovely piece of imagery writting and you managed to fit cranerries in as well! |
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Re: She is charming Je líbezná
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 08:41:00 PM AEST
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so very pretty...shining bright here
Shari |
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Re: She is charming Je líbezná
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by emystar on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 03:01:37 AM AEST
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Beautifull like the person ur.
Thanks for the transelation.
Keep up the good work, my friend.
luv, huggs,
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Re: She is charming Je líbezná
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 04:44:00 AM AEST
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A lovely engaging write, Aika. It produced many colourful and warming images, which were very pleasant to read.
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Re: She is charming Je líbezná
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 07:51:03 AM AEST
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Charming is a very apt word to use.
I was certainly charmed by the words you chose to paint the scene in this aika.
Beautiful !!
steve
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