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Just Another Day
Contributed by
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 11:57:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Just Another Day
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Another year has come and gone
With no birthday cake, no hoorah
No celebration, no party, no sounds of laughter.
No picnic, no gifts, no special cards
No family gatherings
No phone calls of well wishes.
This years, as the year before it
Has come and gone quietly
The only pleasant minutes are the memories.
The only token of the day
Is a flower laid on your grave
And a tear to water it.
Copyright ©
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
... [
2004-06-02 11:57:01]
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Re: Just Another Day
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by InnerBeautyQueen on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 12:25:35 PM AEST
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| this is so sweet and so sad all at once. |
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Re: Just Another Day
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 12:32:40 PM AEST
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Awww this made me feel so sad, it's a beautifully written poem tho, the last stanza is very powerful and hard hitting,
pixie xx |
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Re: Just Another Day
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by Alli on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 12:36:21 PM AEST
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| Very beautiful poem, the last stanza most def pulls it together to stir emotion. You can tell there was a lot put into it. Well done. |
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Re: Just Another Day
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by carmen_queasy on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 02:25:38 PM AEST
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| that was beautiful |
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Re: Just Another Day
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by Overstated on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 02:41:54 PM AEST
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| this is very powerful yet simple - well done very effective |
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