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Mirror has Broken
Contributed by
adsalamon
on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 07:30:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The mirror has broken, 7 years in eternity
Spinning in circles of everlasting nightmare
I see the crack in your porcelain face
The bruise on your cheek, your father kissed
With his fist
An onion shell peeling with each passing day
Closer to the core, the bottle, the knife
The grave
I see you coiled, like a serpent. Ready to strike
At yourself.
Burning away like a candle tipped over
The fire in your mind
Engulfs your soul
Misery, Loneliness and Despair
The darkness hides the tears, not the pain
Which bellows out at night..
Screams in fingernail marks
Copyright ©
adsalamon
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2004-06-02 07:30:21]
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Re: Mirror has Broken
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by Luinil on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 07:42:44 AM AEST
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| again your wording is excellent, you're very talented |
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Re: Mirror has Broken
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by Princesaazul16 on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 08:36:38 AM AEST
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WOAH! I loved this poem. geez, I can't get over it. I read it twice already. Wonderful job! Keep up the good work!
~Stace~ |
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Re: Mirror has Broken
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 09:39:21 AM AEST
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I dont think I have ever read anything by you before, but I was impressed, great job
pixie xx |
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Re: Mirror has Broken
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 07:42:12 PM AEST
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another great poem! I liked the image of the broken mirror really put a lot into my mind. I also liked how u personified the emotions in this poem... hell I liked the whole poem!!!!!
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Mirror has Broken
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by pinkunicornoctober on
Tuesday, 26th July 2011 @ 02:33:19 PM AEST
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| Great Job! |
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