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THE SPACE BEYOND

Contributed by prajwal on Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 05:10:38 AM in AEST
Topic: scifi

IN THE GLARING BLUE CLEAR SKY,
WHERE WE SEE THE FOULS FLY;
OR IN THE STAR-STUDDED EXUBERANT NIGHT,
WE OFTEN CRAVE IN QUEST OF SOME MYSTERIOUS LIGHT;
THE LIGHT FROM THE OUTER SPACE,
THE LIGHT FROM SOME DIFFERENT RACE;
INQUISITIVE NATURE OF HUMAN MIND,
HAS ALWAYS STABED NEW FACTS TO BIND;
BILLIONS OF STARS AND PLANETS FORM THE UNIVERSE,
BUT LIFE ONLY ON EARTH, IS THIS A BOON OR A CURSE;
NUMEROUS RESEARCHERS TRY TO CAPTURE THE FACTS ABOVE,
LOOK UP FOR SOMEONE TO HATE OR TO LOVE;
HOW ELATED IT WOULD FEEL TO KNOW WE ARE NOT ALONE,
THERE ARE SOME MORE RACES OTHER THAN OUR OWN;
BUT THIS MAY PROVE DISASTER TO OUR DYNASTY,
AS THEY MAY BE GENEROUS OR MAY BE NASTY;
WHATEVER IT MAY BE, THIRST FOR ADVENTURE NEVER END,
THEN IT MIGHT HIT WONDERS, OR MAY BE BEND;

Copyright © prajwal ... [ 2004-06-02 05:10:38]
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Re: THE SPACE BEYOND (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 07:13:55 AM AEST
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Overall, quite good. I do like reading about people's hopes and fears for outer space, and this was an interesting write. The last line fell down a bit, though - could you find another word instead of 'bend'? It doesn't really fit, in my opinion.

Anyway - keep writing.

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