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Shatterd
Contributed by
parkman
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Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 04:38:35 AM in AEST
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Shattered
Shattered dreams, a broken illusion
Heart torn to shreds, thoughts so confusing
Soul destroyed, the biggest part of me died
All last night, I just cried and cried and cried
What we have is special, a love that is so rare
The way we could talk, show we really care
Conquer any mountain, beat any foe
Our bond so strong, problems we’d overthrow
How can it disappear, how can it end
You’re my lover and soul mate, my very best friend
Now I don’t know what’s hit me, what lies ahead
I only know I’m empty, I feel already dead
Copyright ©
parkman
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2004-06-02 04:38:35]
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Re: Shatterd
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 07:11:11 AM AEST
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Another dark, yet descriptive write from your prolific pen, parkman. I hope this isn't a true reflection of your reality - and if it is - hang in there . . .
Good write.
Keep writing. |
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Re: Shatterd
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by Princesaazul16 on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 08:30:02 AM AEST
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Nice write. Very strong and powerful. Keep up the good work!
~Stace~ |
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