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Stop pretending
Contributed by
carmen_queasy
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Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 04:27:36 AM in AEST
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You can take away my time, take it away
You can’t take away the memory
That memory that I know you remember too
Don’t pretend that you don’t have a clue
So here I am, in front of you
Wishing you would try
As I layer on each thick coat, of my pathetically weak disguise
You can take away my clothes, just take it away
Leave me standing naked in your doorway
But I won’t leave, I won’t ever leave
No one ever taught me how to breathe
So here I am, down on my knees
Praying someone will hear me cry
Why is the one person I trusted, the one who told me lies?
You can take away my faith, take it away
But I never needed it before
I stopped believing, your faith is fake
And everything I am is now yours to take
So here I am, down on the floor
Wishing you didn’t lie
Why is it the one person I ran to, the one who made me cry?
You took it all away from me, you took it all away
But I promised you, I promised you I’d tell the truth today
You lied to me; you pretended that you loved me, pure and true
You didn’t need me anymore, but I never stopped needing you
So here I am, I lay here broken
Wishing I could fly
Wondering why the one person I lived for, is leaving me to die
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Re: Stop pretending
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 04:37:43 AM AEST
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| Heart felt write..sadly touches the heart..well expressed. venkat |
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Re: Stop pretending
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by prajwal on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 06:01:36 AM AEST
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| THAT'S A BEAUTIFUL WRITE. ALSO I CAN FEEL THE PAIN AND PLIGHT THAT FORMS THE SOUL OF YOUR POEM. THOUGH I DONT KNOW THE MATTER , BUT I SUGGEST YOU NOT TO LOOSE YOUR FAITH THAT EASILY. THERE MAY BE A GOOD REASON FOR WHICH THE PERSON HAS CHANGED THE WAYS. REMEMBER,EVERY GREAT RELATION HAS TO PASS TESTING TIMES. |
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Re: Stop pretending
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by Princesaazul16 on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 08:28:35 AM AEST
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Beautiful..so strong and deep. Keep up the good work! Nice write.
~Stace~ |
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Re: Stop pretending
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by kori31 on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 02:52:06 PM AEST
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| awesome write.........it flowed perfectly...enjoyed it a lot |
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Re: Stop pretending
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by Overstated on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 03:05:52 PM AEST
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a very intriguing poem well done love the start - You can take away my time, take it away
You can’t take away the memory - really made me wanna read more.. well done!!
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