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No-one sees
Contributed by
holderofthestone
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Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 11:57:44 PM in AEST
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suffering, anger, hatred, and lies
no-one sees the terror, growing in my eyes
growing from within, deep inside my soul
no-one sees my fear, breaking my control
I want to end the pain, but I don’t know how
no-one sees me thinking, I've got to figure out
what it is the keeps me, on this ***** earth
no-one sees me trying, to get what I deserve
even though I’m lonely, days and nights are cold
no-one sees me longing, for something I can hold
as emptiness takes over, and the tears fall down
no-one sees me searching, wanting only to be found
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Re: No-one sees
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by InnerBeautyQueen on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 12:03:27 AM AEST
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yeah... good write
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Re: No-one sees
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by kidpoet_213 on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 12:42:03 AM AEST
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Uh huh... I agree... great write... my friend... u make one feel all the emotions that no one sees...
~Donna~ |
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Re: No-one sees
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by evilfairy on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 01:43:38 AM AEST
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| Nice work! |
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Re: No-one sees
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 02:16:13 AM AEST
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| well expressed..good write. venkat |
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Re: No-one sees
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by Arwen on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 10:01:40 AM AEST
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Everyone gets angry at the world from time to time, we see the wrong things that happen to others, the injustices and abuse of the innocent...and it very nearly makes you want to just go away and never come back. But doing something about making your world is the only meaningful way to act.
I liked this poem, Short and intriguing. Very well expressed! :) You truly have talent. |
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Re: No-one sees
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by MDodgen on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 10:56:51 AM AEST
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| very good job, you put down exactly what you wanted to say. there is someone out there for you, you just need to find her. good work, great emotion. |
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Re: No-one sees
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by wray on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 07:40:01 AM AEST
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| God I know! The torturing emotions, the unbelievable longing, the aching emptiness.. makes you feel like you're gona explode sometimes. Or melt away... (that gives me an idea for a poem! thnx!!) |
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Re: No-one sees
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:54:00 PM AEST
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wow, that was emotional this one made my heart sink and my knees feel weak...I shed a tear for this one..i knwo what you feel I loved it..great write...once again....
much love,
Dani |
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