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Nature's Path
Contributed by
Luinil
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Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 06:09:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Trees stretch out their newly roused arms
Sprouts yawn into bloom
Sky’s tears fade slowly from the path
Simple life crawls across the way
Sun trickles through patchy leaves,
Gently strokes ungrateful treaders
Climbing, sliding, turning into unknown
Each step is hope and the circle goes unbroken
Copyright ©
Luinil
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2004-06-01 18:09:51]
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Re: Nature's Path
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 06:14:56 PM AEST
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| This is a good poem for a start if you want you can read "Walking in the Woods" I write decent upbeat poetry tell me what you think. |
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Re: Nature's Path
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 05:02:25 AM AEST
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Very good work..it looks spotless..though I don't prefer use of the word "Sky's tears"
in the description of morning....where as "sprouts yawn" is lovely..keep up the good poetic spirit. best of luck. venkat |
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