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HELP
Contributed by
YoungArra
on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 04:58:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Until I feel better I'm gonna write a couple letters
because I'm tired of all the stress
at times I wanna get put to rest
cause this world so cold how do I keep a smile
tell me where do I turn now
am I at the end of my road
I'm only 22 years old
this can't be the life that I live
please lord can you help me give
or better yet receive
I'm begging down on my knees
and I have a babygirl to feed.
peace
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Re: HELP
(User Rating: 1 ) by Colleen on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 05:03:17 PM AEST (User
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That was really sad, but very well written. I am sorry you're feeling that way. |
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Re: HELP
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 09:22:52 PM AEST (User
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congrats on your daughter. you are at the end of the road because you havent finished with the contruction of it. obligation and responsibility will always test you in life, always pass or you might fail more than yourself. |
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Re: HELP
(User Rating: 1 ) by classicfailedhero on
Tuesday, 13th November 2007 @ 11:07:20 AM AEST (User
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i liked this poem- keep it up |
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