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Life is Like Rain
Contributed by
Colleen
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Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 04:13:13 PM in AEST
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It takes away the sun's warmth
Leaving me cold
It pours down on me relentlessly
I can never get dry, so its misery stays damp upon me
The rain puddles up
Making poor children stay inside
But then the sun comes up again
And I know it's a sign for me
The rain is lifted off me
Leaving me refreshed
The rain starts clean again, ready for a new cycle
I know I'll be ready for it this time, because the sun will always dry the tears that I've cried
Copyright ©
Colleen
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2004-06-01 16:13:13]
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Re: Life is Like Rain
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by morelikelyrics on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 04:27:17 PM AEST
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Let's hope that everyday will bring sunshine on our lives to dry up all life's tears...
Incredibly creative, and somewhat depressing, really....
either way, I enjoyed this... and inspirational as well...
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Re: Life is Like Rain
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 11:47:07 PM AEST
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