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Blind
Contributed by
MDodgen
on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 02:52:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Why did you choose me?
I've already been hurt
I trusted you
and with that I became
blind
blind to your hate
I believe in tender care
you used me up
but now you're done
I hurt so bad
but i've closed my blinds
you'll see me no more
I'll get you back
like me,
you should have learned
now you'll pay
I'm sorry I cared
but the past is gone
I won't take it back
you understand my pain
soon you'll reflect your own.
Copyright ©
MDodgen
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2004-06-01 14:52:11]
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Re: Blind
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by adanawa on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 04:33:09 PM AEST
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| Wow I can realate to what you are feeling I love it keep up the good work |
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Re: Blind
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by holderofthestone on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 02:49:55 AM AEST
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| Just know that not eveyone is out to hurt you. some people care for you more than life itself......and I know they would do anything for you. |
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Re: Blind
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by venkat on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 03:01:12 AM AEST
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| Good write..keep it up. venkat |
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