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Unforgiven

Contributed by screwup on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 02:31:03 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



look out the window,
see the bridge
want to fall
face is bleeding, battered,
like a broken doll
cant stand you
and the things you do to me
why do I deserve this
cant you leave me be
dont want you to touch me anymore
no more brusies, no more lies
no more anything to hide
no more abuse
no more nothing,
no more use
you dont care that I want to die
cutting my wrists
silently bleeding, into my last cry
taking my last breath,
as you pull me into my secret hell
I die inside
you are the hell to society
and the hell that lives in me
your overpowering body hovering over mine
I can still feel your breath down my neck and the knife in my back,
and you, holding me down like a tack
I can still see the grin you gave
as you got off me witout care
and the pain I cannot bare
your hellish face still haunts my very core
thoughts of you, am I a whore?
thoughts of me, it is all my fault
with you and me, the sexual asaults
what do I do,
how do I move on
I am so scared
so much to come
I just dont have the will anymore,
no will to fight
no self-esteem, no light
I hate myself so much
that I just cannot heal
I hate myself so much
that I just cannot deal




Copyright © screwup ... [ 2004-06-01 14:31:03]
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Re: Unforgiven (User Rating: 1 )
by reprobate on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 02:38:18 PM AEST
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if this is real, find the closest abuse shelter and fly there. yesterday. if not, you deinitely made it come to life.
thanks for sharing


Re: Unforgiven (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 02:40:54 PM AEST
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very poignant poem , gave me chills..


Re: Unforgiven (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 03:19:10 PM AEST
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Deanna...
Yes... I do understand perfectly... my friend...
I like it ur poem... the way u have expressed ur feelings... I know it's not an easy thing to do... plz don't hesitate to ever call me or email me or pm if u want to talk... I'm here... my friend... for u always....
~Donna~


Re: Unforgiven (User Rating: 1 )
by eatfresh22 on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 04:07:54 PM AEST
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Sickeningly honest poem. It's horrible how abuse can make us feel so horrible about ourselves. Amazing, touching poem.
~Carrie~


Re: Unforgiven (User Rating: 1 )
by DirtyFool on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 04:22:09 PM AEST
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This poem is very heartwrenching. i am srry for what your going through. i hope everything turns out ok. but very good poem
!!!




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