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False
Contributed by
reilt
on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 11:42:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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You stole words from poets
To pursue me, woo me
Til you thieved me too
And when you had me
Safely nestled
In the pocket of your soul
Didn't you drape those
Sonnets bout my succumbing heart
Lulled me to the lilt and language
That talked themselves
Into a beautiful us.
Ah but when the silence fell around us
And you wre tied to lies
Without a tongue to speak your way out
Wasn't I the first to know
Your plagiary of feelings
Wasn't I the first to see
The crime committed with
A false voice
And worse
A false heart.
Copyright ©
reilt
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2004-06-01 11:42:22]
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Re: False
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by Ina on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 11:45:35 AM AEST
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This poem is now published permenantly inside my head. Funny, I am actually involved with a poet, and his love words are always plagerized, I fear.
Thank you for commenting on mine. Gave me a chance to read your poetry... |
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Re: False
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 11:57:43 AM AEST
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Excellent. Love your writes.
Stitch |
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Re: False
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by afterdark on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 03:21:22 PM AEST
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| this is one that I really do like,and will read again.. |
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Re: False
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by holderofthestone on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 02:42:41 AM AEST
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| Nicely written. It always hurts to know words spoken werent their own, but what if they only didnt know how to form the words to express their feelings on their own.... great poem |
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Re: False
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by RavenOktober on
Monday, 10th October 2011 @ 05:13:53 AM AEST
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| this is amazing. people use words all the time to lull us into a false sense of security...and then the mask falls away. Incredible |
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