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Dissolution
Contributed by
emphaticplacebo
on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 08:42:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I don’t know what real these days anymore
Squeezing my eyes tight to fight back the tears
Reminiscing through the stages of my short life
I need to be rescued from all my lies and fears
I can’t take all the deception and strain anymore
Its all proving too much to bear, let alone affray
I must find a way out, a means to an overdue end
To break these false shackles, and lead me astray
All that I believed in; my convictions, dust to dust
Dissolute. Crumbling like weary façades of age old
I’m tired. Let my somnolent body rest evermore
Let the winds of change take me away from the cold
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emphaticplacebo
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2004-06-01 08:42:12]
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Re: Dissolution
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by taintedmind on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 08:44:26 AM AEST
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| greatly expressed loved it |
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Re: Dissolution
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by Luinil on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 08:49:23 AM AEST
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| very deep, your rhymes fit in really well with the flow of it... great write |
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Re: Dissolution
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 03:58:17 PM AEST
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Beautiful... there was a haunting qaulity in
this write that really got to me. I loved the last
line especially it was so strong and was a
perfect ending to the poem. You made this
seem very real and yeah I am now definitely a
fan.
Bobo (Joel) |
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