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my bloodied soul
Contributed by
taintedmind
on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 08:17:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
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i scream when i think of you
i scream when im alone
but you don't seem to care
i cry when i cant touch your face
i cry when i cant feel your grace
but still you don't seem to care
after all this pain and hate i feel for you
you still don't seem to care for me like i do you
so i write you a letter telling you my fears
in five minutes i will be dead
in five minutes i will be in hell
in five minutes you could have saved my life
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taintedmind
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2004-06-01 08:17:35]
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Re: my bloodied soul
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by Princesaazul16 on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 08:20:51 AM AEST
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Woah. Nice job. I liked this poem a lot. You did a very good job expressing your feelings. I can understand how you feel. Nice job. Keep up the good work.
~Stace~ |
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Re: my bloodied soul
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by Luinil on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 08:40:22 AM AEST
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| very powerful... good job |
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Re: my bloodied soul
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by Rhei76 on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 08:55:38 AM AEST
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Nicely expressed. Strong emotion for such few words. This is great work. I'm sorry feelings must be torn to deliever strenghth in words like these. God bless you.
Time heals! |
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Re: my bloodied soul
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by krisseee on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 09:34:16 AM AEST
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this is another bloody brilliant write.
there's some good stuff today. |
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Re: my bloodied soul
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 11:38:31 AM AEST
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powerful.. great of expressing all of your feelings.. this was a excellent write...
christina |
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