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Broke Her Heart
Contributed by
StrangeLittleGirl
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Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 08:02:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Internal bleeding from a broken heart leaves scars on the arms and fragile thoughts in mind.
Fallen tears have been freed ny the agony of depravity of love.
Meaningless words flow through her mouth and argue with the voice in her head.
The anger has arrived, raised from the dead, to be released at the time of rage.
Fire, fury, burn inside, while dejection eats from the inside out and seizes all trace of ecstasy.
Looks Like you broke her heart again.
Rejected, isolated, alone again, it was really only a matter of time.
Looks like you broke her heart again.
Life no longer has meaning; all purpose is absent, gone like her feelings.
Her mind is so blank yet confused, twisted, reminiscent of her soul.
She needs a feeling to know she's real; she needs to be aware of her existence.
Her soul has been shattered as have her dreams of your future together.
Looks like you broke her heart again.
She's been here before, many a time, she should have learnt by now,
She never should have trusted you again, she'd of been better off alone.
She's too despondent, too fragile; she can't get up like before,
Looks like you broke her heart again.
It's finally all over, coagulation has begun; no more damage can be done.
Her agony, pain and suffering has been ended once and for all,
Finally she is freed as she lays still on the floor, her self obliteration shows,
Present in the form of intense lacerations on her wrists.
She could not be saved this time; she has been murdered by love,
Looks like you broke her heart again, for the final time.
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StrangeLittleGirl
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2004-06-01 08:02:48]
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Re: Broke Her Heart
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by taintedmind on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 08:24:18 AM AEST
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great awesome
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Re: Broke Her Heart
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by Princesaazul16 on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 08:25:09 AM AEST
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Oh my!! I did not get bored at any part of your poem. I loved it!! I understand how you feel. You did a very good job. I read it 3 times in a row because I was amazed by how you worded your feelings so well. I hope to read more of your writes. Keep up the good work!
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Re: Broke Her Heart
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by JT on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 08:39:40 AM AEST
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wow. what a powerful write. great from start to finish.
-jt- |
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Re: Broke Her Heart
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by Shawn_Radley on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 08:45:17 AM AEST
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Wow.
Now Amy, you know you can write like a genius. The way you worded your emotions and feelings was just amazing!
*Claps*
Keep up the good work. I love your poems.
Shawn xx |
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Re: Broke Her Heart
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 09:12:05 AM AEST
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Bored ?....no....Absorbed......yes !!
A great work which held my attention from start to finish
Thanks
steve |
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Re: Broke Her Heart
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by matingcrow on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 10:24:35 AM AEST
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Those who get bored are.
"She's too despondent, too fragile; she can't get up like before" Pristine. M |
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