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Contributed by
StrangeLittleGirl
on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 06:09:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Your body next to mine
Our hearts beating in time
Your breath on my skin
The love I feel within
Your hand on my face
Your loving embrace
The warmth that we share
Your tender loving care
The pain that we feel
Our love is so real
The tears that we cry
Our long goodbyes
Your lips touching mine
Our bodies entwined
Our eyes are fixated
Our love is stated
You make me complete
You make my heart beat
You keep me alive
For you I strive.
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StrangeLittleGirl
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2004-06-01 06:09:03]
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Re: Us
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 07:07:19 AM AEST
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Awwww this is soo beautiful, great read
pixie xx |
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Re: Us
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by JT on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 07:27:58 AM AEST
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| Great write. Your both lucky to have each other with such strong feelings. |
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by Avarice_Riot on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 07:42:25 AM AEST
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| Aww, that's so sweet and beautiful. Long may it last between you two. |
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Re: Us
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by Shawn_Radley on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 08:48:14 AM AEST
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| Great write Amy. It really touched me. Keep them coming. =) |
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