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Whisper
Contributed by
carmen_queasy
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Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 04:28:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Please can you save me?
I know you always do
And that every time I ask, all I see is you
I hid in the corner yesterday
But you still found me crying
You told me truth, you told the truth when everyone was lying
And when I’m dying, I’ll whisper to no one
No one will hear me say
Just how much it means to me
That someone wanted me today
Please will you hold me?
I know you do, no questions asked
I can’t look you in the eye; I didn’t mean to fall so fast
I felt so trapped yesterday
But then you came and took my hand
Everyone was judging me but you were there to understand
And when I’m dying, I’ll whisper to no one
Because no one will hear me say
Just by being in your arms
All the pain fades away
Yesterday I panicked,
I never meant for you to know
Everyday that’s spent with you, my happiness seems to grow
I promise you truth, because you promise the same to me
I wish you could know that you are everything to me
And when I’m dying, I’ll whisper to everyone
And everyone will hear me say
You gave me strength to carry on
I fell in love with you today
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2004-06-01 04:28:01]
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Re: Whisper
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 05:28:26 AM AEST
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| This is an awesome poem it is as if you are writing to God, if you are not that does not take away from the inspiration this poem brings. |
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Re: Whisper
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 05:38:18 AM AEST
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Greatly written,
pixie xx |
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Re: Whisper
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by StrangeLittleGirl on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 05:46:11 AM AEST
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| This poem is beautiful :) |
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Re: Whisper
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by Avarice_Riot on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 05:50:14 AM AEST
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| I found this very beautiful and inspiring, whoever this is dedicated to must be a great person. |
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Re: Whisper
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by bernard on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 07:43:50 AM AEST
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Good play on no-one and every-one great poem and i hope the peron it was written for sees it. top marks.
bernard. |
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