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One friend down
Contributed by
the_story_of_the_year
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Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 12:24:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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One friend down
Run by herself to the ground
Such a sad story
Is this story I found
She's so confused
Only she is to blame
She wants to be treated right
Although she doesn't treat others the same
On a path to no where
She guides herself
To a path of sorrow
Like the one I once found
I've tried to be
The example she needs
So that she can be
The person that means so much to me
Or maybe the person
That MEANT so much to me
Things may have changed
For me
Not for you
Things may be the same
Inside of you
I think I'm done trying
To help you off the ground
I'm sorry to say
That my friend has gone down
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2004-06-01 00:24:15]
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Re: One friend down
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 12:42:20 AM AEST
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this poem is almost haunting to me Iv been going through the exact same thing with a friend of over 17 years and now I need to let her go. You expressed your feeling so well. Its hard but sometimes the best thing for us at times people we care so greatly about can pull us down with them.
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Re: One friend down
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 03:27:19 AM AEST
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dude, awesome poem...great write I enjoyed it I disagree with what you said about it not being deep...I thought it was...hehe and thats all that matters...well yeah Im going through this at this very moment...lol well period in my life...being the moment but you know F**** it...Ill move on...youll move on keep on keeping on...lol we have the same taste in music...did I tell you that...lol anyways I enjoyed this piece I relate...on a personal level keep iy up keep it coming...
read and comment mine if you want...I'd love to hear what you think...
much love,
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