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Rhythm of Love
Contributed by
venkat
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Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 12:15:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Even now I remember your
Full moon face, fascinating eyes
Sweet red lips and swolen breasts
Which made me mad, like a bee
I drank honey from your lotus face!
Even now I remember you in love
Your body weak with fatigue
Swarms of curling hair falling
On pale red cheeks trying to hide
Secret of the guilt your soft arms
clung like vines on my neck!
I remember rapture in your eyes
Glittering pupils dancing wildly
In love’s vigil like a wild goose
In our lotus bed of passion your face
Bowed low with shame at dawn!
Even now I remember you
Holding the reins in our wild dance
of love, lustre of moon on your face
Your body trembling with passion
Delicately bent by lush breasts
And heavy round hips dancing,
Mantled in mane of flying hair!
I remember your sweet lovely face
Golden ear rings grazing your cheeks
As you strove to take the man’s role
Beads of sweat strewn thick like pearls
From toil of your rhythmic swinging!
I wondered if you were goddess of love
or a nymph of heaven come to earth
and whether the Creator did create you
only to fascinate me your lover poet?
1-6-2004
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venkat
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2004-06-01 00:15:08]
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Re: Rhythm of Love
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 12:40:11 AM AEST
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woooooo venkat this is sultry romantic and ever so beautiful and steamy Im getting the fan!! great job my friend
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Re: Rhythm of Love
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 12:40:53 AM AEST
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Hmmm..now this is certainly one rhythm I could dance to...
Jenni |
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Re: Rhythm of Love
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 01:01:54 AM AEST
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well written...
shari
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Re: Rhythm of Love
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 03:18:40 AM AEST
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| The best poem I've read of yours to date venkat ... intoxicating, alluring, passionate ... excellent write ... Jan |
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Re: Rhythm of Love
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by Avarice_Riot on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 05:44:32 AM AEST
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| Wow, that was definitely sensuous and a thrilling read. This could be my favorite out of your work, venkat. |
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Re: Rhythm of Love
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by arden on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 12:05:18 AM AEST
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whoa....steamy..like yea lol
wow i really like this. really romantic and beautiful.
well done my friend.
Arden |
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Re: Rhythm of Love
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by holderofthestone on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 02:14:28 AM AEST
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| very poetic. great read! |
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Re: Rhythm of Love
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by Hurretje on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 03:24:27 AM AEST
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Marvelous write..a whirling love dance!
Greetz,
Hur |
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Re: Rhythm of Love
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by MDodgen on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 11:50:27 AM AEST
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| beautiful beautiful poem. i don't know what more i can say. this is a perfect poem. i loved the lotus lines. i'm sure it's not just me, this poem must make everyone who reads it melt. very very good job. |
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Re: Rhythm of Love
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 12:33:46 PM AEST
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good grief man i don't know how i've missed your poetry, but wow I don't know what to say. I found this to be rather good despite the erotica of it. Keep it up.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Rhythm of Love
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 10:56:05 PM AEST
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Ahhhh rhythmic beauty dancing on my screen,so poetic and exhausting! Lovely emotions tied in this wonderful dance with your mate! Simply divine!
:::::fanning myself:::::: 0:-)
Angel always.....godspeed my dear friend...
Joni |
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Re: Rhythm of Love
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 03:17:21 AM AEST
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Oh My Venkat........this is definitely one of your best. Remembering making love is so enchanting!
Your pictures that flashed through my mind.
Can't say I've heard nor seen like these to find.
How romantically beautiful.......this one will survive the time!
Great work
Poetic hugs
consue |
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by mountainhigh on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 04:33:35 AM AEST
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Venkat, this is a most beautiful tribute to two souls becoming as one.
Great Poem to love.
Thank you for this dream.
Chris |
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Re: Rhythm of Love
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 05:52:22 AM AEST
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Lovely poem, amazingly romantic.
An absolutely thrill to read. |
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Re: Rhythm of Love
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:13:03 AM AEST
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sensuous and romantic, truely beautiful poem venkat, great images too:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Rhythm of Love
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by JennyFruFru on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 07:47:05 AM AEST
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| what a magnificent picture you created... how lovely you describe her ever movement and detail... beautifully done :) |
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Re: Rhythm of Love
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by Scarlett on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 05:01:13 AM AEST
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| wow. amazing. this is the first of your poems i have read and i am blown away by it. so descriptive and different, a work of art. |
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Re: Rhythm of Love
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by Buggsy on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 09:33:21 AM AEST
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| Wonderful! Need more be said? |
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