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never be free from you
Contributed by
lilred_2009
on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 09:15:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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This black hole within,
is sucking me in,
and I can't escape,
these demons you make.
It's too hard to admit you're gone,
too much to see you've moved on,
these memories won't leave,
from you i'll never be free.
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Re: never be free from you
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by Saitou-sama on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 10:22:53 PM AEST
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| I've felt this same way, and it does get better over time. You just need to find something else to focus on. Me, I picked writing a short story. It really helped. Great poem, btw. The rhyming pattern was fantastic. |
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Re: never be free from you
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 01:27:52 AM AEST
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Hmm... this would suck. You must have really been close to that person to feel like you are theirs forever... good write...
Jodi |
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Re: never be free from you
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 01:27:52 AM AEST
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Hmm... this would suck. You must have really been close to that person to feel like you are theirs forever... good write...
Jodi |
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Re: never be free from you
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by Archie on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 12:46:44 AM AEST
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"Just as I waked out of my door
I though I heard your voice again"
Quote from the poem "Memory"
Your poem reminds me of the poem i wrote about lost love. You did a very good job on this. |
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