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Immense feelings
Contributed by
pickles99
on
Saturday, 12th October 2002 @ 03:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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So madly in love
However our distance rips me apart
It seems I’m crying tears of blood
That drip slowly down my face
A clutter of feelings running wildly through my body
Inflamed by uncontrollable waves of emotion
Scrambled thoughts hang on
Praying for peace of mind
Unable to calm this overflow of emotions
Filled with what seems to be indecision and misdirection
Feeling so lost without you
Trying to get a grip on myself
Desperately aching to share life with you again
Slowly losing control of myself
Wondering what has happened to me
Screaming out in both delight and pain
Words lost within
Echoing over and over
In a shallow state of confusion
Realizing the indescribable feelings
That love has brought upon me
Copyright ©
pickles99
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2002-10-12 15:30:00]
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Re: Immense feelings
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 12:01:49 AM AEST
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| terrific write. a lot of emotion shown. |
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Re: Immense feelings
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by Walter on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 08:46:06 PM AEST
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| good work, you are really emotional |
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Re: Immense feelings
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by x0x_lorlor on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 12:05:46 AM AEST
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| very emotional poem.. ahah i like it! :D |
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