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My Mistake within
Contributed by
Lovely_4_steve
on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 07:25:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I've made a mistake within.
It was by letting you in.
I gave my heart to you, but you just threw it in the soil.
I tried showing you I cared...
But you just yelled and screamed and told me to get out.
I left you in peace, knowing you wouldn"t miss me.
Don"t be surprised when you find me in pieces. you tore me apart, piece by piece, it took so long to show.
I made a mistake within, by letting you in.
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2004-05-31 19:25:40]
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Re: My Mistake within
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by holderofthestone on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 07:30:05 PM AEST
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| Nicely written. I feel like i can relate. great poem! |
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Re: My Mistake within
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by Luinil on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 07:42:58 PM AEST
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| i really like the style of this... good job |
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Re: My Mistake within
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by Archie on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 07:46:56 PM AEST
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| I hope this is a moving on poem and not a doing something drastic poem. True love will find you use the time in between to heal. |
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Re: My Mistake within
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by Silent-No-More on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 08:21:17 PM AEST
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| Heartwrenching. Nothing hurts more than letting someone in and then regretting it when it falls apart. You're pain comes through in this piece. |
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