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Courage
Contributed by
Luinil
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Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 06:54:57 PM in AEST
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Courage my brothers and sisters,
Courage through the fight
Cry out to the red rising sun
March the blood-drenched ground at night
Battle is near at hand
Yield no mercy on your rival
Swinging blades sing success
Fight for king, not for survival
Let fear fade from your eyes
Seize your fate on the field
Let valor surge through your veins
Through your hands, your sword, your shield
Cut down ravenous tyranny
Let loose your searing rage
Let fly your fiery arrows
Unleash your vicious rampage
Scarlet sun rises and sets
Peace is near, not yet in sight
Courage friend, you endured the day
Courage, tomorrow we end this fight.
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Re: Courage
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by holderofthestone on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 07:09:34 PM AEST
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| Nice write, has a great flow to it and very creative ryhmes. A++++ |
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Re: Courage
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 07:09:59 PM AEST
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War is such a burden for all involved. If you do have to fight one though, then fight with everything you have to win it. Excellent piece of work.
Rita |
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Re: Courage
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by mdmorash on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 11:21:23 PM AEST
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| Nicely done. I like the imagry, and the flow of the message. |
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Re: Courage
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 06:17:15 PM AEST
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| Good poem I might be talking to a christain tell me if that is true. |
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Re: Courage
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 06:17:22 PM AEST
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| Good poem I might be talking to a christain tell me if that is true. |
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Re: Courage
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 06:17:23 PM AEST
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| Good poem I might be talking to a christain tell me if that is true. |
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