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No more words
Contributed by
holderofthestone
on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 06:54:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I told the one I love today
I have to let her go
I'll always love her in my heart
just no longer will I show
I let her know the reason why
of why I finally broke
and as I tried to look at her
this is what she spoke...
"I love you though
I love you so
please dont leave
please dont go
I need you here
I need you near
I need you to hold
to love my dear"
I tried to look her in the eyes
to show her all my pain
but every tear I ever cried
now it seemed in vain
I remembered all of those
sleepless nights in bed
and as I looked up at her
this is what I said...
"You took to long
I hung around
you took your time
I played the clown
but now I see
no-longer blind
you cant love me
Im not your kind....
I dont mistreat you
I dont lie
I dont talk bad
dont make you cry
I really care
I dont want to use you
Im always there
I never abused you"
she cried out to me
"I made mistakes
Ill make it up
just tell what it takes
I Know that I was heartless
I saw you crying there
I couldnt stand to tell myself
that I caused the tears"
I couldnt belive it...
she always knew
she was the reason
I was so blue
and she still did those things
she still broke my heart
I feel like a fool
played from the start
I heared those words
escape her lips...
I drew my hands
back from her hips...
cried one last tear
with my back to her face
looked back at her
and slowly walked away....
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2004-05-31 18:54:28]
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Re: No more words
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by Luinil on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 06:57:42 PM AEST
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| that's a rough situation, i'm sorry you had to go through it. but you wrote beautifully... good job |
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Re: No more words
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 07:11:12 PM AEST
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well written feelings...and a very painful situation
Shari |
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Re: No more words
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by LittleWillow on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 07:33:19 PM AEST
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| Aww.... so sad, but so beautifully written. I love emotional poetry. This one is excellent. |
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Re: No more words
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by Silent-No-More on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 07:40:05 PM AEST
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| Letting yourself see the truth is hard enough. Doing something about it, takes an enormous amount of strength and bravery. Oh, holder... I knew you knew and I knew you could. But... that doesn't make it any less difficult. I know how hard this must have been and I'm terribly sorry for it. *hug* |
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Re: No more words
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by matingcrow on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 10:16:34 PM AEST
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i drew my hands
back from her hips
cried one last tear
Nice...
with my back to her face
Nicer. Strength shown while weakness felt. As we are. |
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Re: No more words
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by carmen_queasy on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 04:48:20 AM AEST
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| all i can say is "ouch". |
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Re: No more words
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 06:41:23 PM AEST
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wow...This right here...these are the words I should have spoke...this is my story...wow I cried at this one...but like it was weird I dont know ...this is my favorite one...this is what happened...only Im you and my boyfriend was her...wow this is crazy...I loved this one...
much love,
Dani...
p.s. are stories are the same only you write them better...lol MASTERPIECE!!!! |
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Re: No more words
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by justjonesy on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 04:39:40 PM AEST
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| Awesome...good job...a great breakup/confessions write |
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