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Zoma

Contributed by liquidsunshine on Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 03:59:40 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes



I dreamed a dream when I was eight
At the movies, it was late

I got my ticket for the movie
The theater was awf’ly groovy

I sat down—the second row
The silver screen had an eerie glow

There were no previews, just a jolt
Across the screen-- a lightning bolt

It looked like some strange arcade game
A creepy one—Zoma the name

A room full of reflecting glass
And mats on the floor—just like gym class

Just then a door bursts open wide
A praying mantis comes inside

He’s big and green and slimy too
I’m scared! I don’t know what to do!

And soon there were a hundred more
I couldn’t flee, they blocked the door

But OH!—the matted floor broke up
From one to the next I could leap and jump

I jumped right through a trap-door ceiling
Had I been a car, my tires were peeling

I ran for life away from there
But one green mantis caught my hair

I screamed so loud it could not hear
My weapon was so quickly clear

I yelled a lot and ran real fast
Hoping this would cease to last

Through purple doors I dashed away
Into a bedroom, where I’d stay

I was quite glad I’d been so deft
When I calmed down, nothing was left

Remaining sleep without a dream
But I woke in a sweaty steam

I can’t forget that crazy scene
That sucked me in the movie screen




Copyright © liquidsunshine ... [ 2004-05-31 15:59:40]
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Re: Zoma (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 04:13:31 PM AEST
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I've got to say,
that's quite a dream
If it were mine,
I'm sure I'd scream
From ugly bugs
I'd rather run
I don't like bugs
They are no fun!
Stitch


Re: Zoma (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 04:22:02 PM AEST
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Well u certainly painted a good picture of your nitemare.
good job.
luv, huggs,
emy


Re: Zoma (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 04:26:23 PM AEST
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This is a good poem and funny too wow I could think of some movie titles that remind me of this dream.


Re: Zoma (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 07:14:10 PM AEST
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Your imagery was great. The theme was intriguing. I always feel this way when I go to an IMAX production. It draws me deep into the subject. Gret write.

Rita


Re: Zoma (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 07:15:06 PM AEST
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well written good flow followed the ride

Shari


Re: Zoma (User Rating: 1 )
by eatfresh22 on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 04:50:11 PM AEST
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Great rhythym to this poem. Such a fun, easy one to read, it just flowed right off the screen. I enjoyed it. Dreams can be rather scary. Very cute!
~Carrie~


Re: Zoma (User Rating: 1 )
by TheVoice on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 09:47:01 PM AEST
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WOW!! Late night eats before bed.....lol

Great write, enjoyed very much.

The Voice


Re: Zoma (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 12:57:57 AM AEST
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Oh my! Not exactly fun. I must say, however, I've never known the terror of being pursued by bugs... and I live on a farm...
Nice job!
Andrew


Re: Zoma (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 12:54:44 AM AEST
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very creative:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Zoma (User Rating: 1 )
by OhSaige on Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 04:42:51 PM AEST
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I love the imagery Excellant write




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