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Super Girl
Contributed by
Colleen
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Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 02:13:36 PM in AEST
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I'm tired of being everyone's super girl
the clam forever protecting the pearl
Why can't they stand on their own
are that that afraid of being left alone
What if someday I can't wipe away their tears
what if their trouble never reaches my ears
Do they have someone telling them they'll be okay
or someone to come without a minute's delay
Is there no one else with open arms
no one to protect them from this world's harms
No one else who will just sit and listen
someone to remove all the pain from within
It troubles me to feel this way
what would my friends think, what would they say
I mean, I can't always be there
even though it sounds extremely unfair
I love my friends with everything in me
I hope they don't notice I'm not as strong as I appear to be
I worry a lot about what they say and feel
so why am I bothered still, why don't I feel real
Maybe I need to be heard for a few moments
maybe I need a friend's consolance
I definantly am not fit to be a hero
I hope I have clearly painted that mural
Copyright ©
Colleen
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2004-05-31 14:13:36]
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Re: Super Girl
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 02:50:18 PM AEST
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This is well written , you did make your point , I hope they read this and see that sometime's a hero needs a shoulder once in a while too.
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Re: Super Girl
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by Trisha on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 07:09:20 PM AEST
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Hey Colleen. I think you're trying to point out you need someone to cry on and reach out too.
I think you're always there for someone but why
aren't they there for you? |
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Re: Super Girl
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by MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE on
Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 02:14:06 PM AEST
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| EVERYONE NEEDS A SUPER HERO BUT YET EVERY SUPER HERO NEEDS SOMEONE AS WELL ....NICE WRITE |
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Re: Super Girl
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by MissMandy on
Tuesday, 15th January 2008 @ 06:43:27 PM AEST
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I'm so with you... sometimes I can't handle being the shoulder anymore.
Great write. kudos. |
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