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The Freak
Contributed by
pixie
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Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 01:42:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I am the one locked away I am the freak,
I have no face and I can not speak,
But if I could talk I would say hurtful things,
And if I had a face I know people would cringe.
I am deep down where no-one can see,
And believe it or not this is where I like to be,
Down here I possess all kinds of power,
Out there I would be as vulnerable as a flower.
I am staying put for all eternity,
Locked away in this non existent captivity,
Hidden away from the big cruel world,
From all the lovely boys and girls.
If I were ever to be unleashed,
Pure havoc on earth would be wreaked,
I will never be allowed out of my cage,
Never to show everyone my true potential rage.
I’m quite used to my dark domain,
Because in here I can not inflict any pain,
I feed on thoughts and feelings of adrenalin,
I take them in here and drink from within.
I have no friends and I live alone,
In my dungeon, that I call home,
All day I sit and all through the night,
Conjuring up ways to let others hear my plight.
The screams I let out are inside my head,
As I lay thrashing about in this horrifying death bed,
No-one will hear me, not now and not ever,
Here I will stay with nothing to sever.
My insides are twisted and mangled with fear,
But I am isolated and nothing comes near,
I am the one locked away I am the freak,
I have no face and I can not speak.
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pixie
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2004-05-31 13:42:05]
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Re: The Freak
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by Colleen on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 02:04:34 PM AEST
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| That is a really amazing poem! I am sorry that you feel that way... |
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Re: The Freak
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by TwEeK on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 04:54:41 PM AEST
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really good poem there
i echo how you feel, i feel so much the same
ever need to talk you can talk to me
once again good poem
tweeky |
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Re: The Freak
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by Avarice_Riot on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 06:03:51 AM AEST
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| This will no doubt sound corny but reading this, it's like you're speaking to my soul, I know the feeling you're conveying here. Well done, it's a very emotional and expressive poem. |
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Re: The Freak
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by Princesaazul16 on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 07:51:48 AM AEST
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Nice. I love how you explain yourself in your poems. It's great. I always look forward to reading them. Keep up the good work!
~Stace~ |
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Re: The Freak
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by screwup on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 01:32:42 PM AEST
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| I think this one is one of your best, Pixie. I can really relate to this one. It is very deep and dark, and that's what I like. I simply love it!!! |
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