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My Love My Death
Contributed by
norticus
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Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 01:36:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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In this gentle breeze I hear your breath
the sound chills me
I am afraid to this day that in love I will be robbed
Yet I pray--rob me--rob me of all that I have
To think you walk the same muddy earth
and gaze the same cloudy skies
But never have your eyes been cast towards mine
Yet I know you hold my package
My great and wonderful tragedy
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Re: My Love My Death
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ilhar on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 03:07:02 PM AEST (User
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strong ...I do enjoy your writing
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Re: My Love My Death
(User Rating: 1 ) by flamingblade on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 03:01:20 PM AEST (User
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i like this
it's short and doesn't waste time getting to the point
good job
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