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Killer
Contributed by
Gothik_twitch
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Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 01:20:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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My pink hair is twisted
My dark eyes are bleeding
My clothing is torn
Im not even breathing.
My white gloves are bloody
My teeth are getting sharp
My boyfriend was cheating
So I stabbed him in the heart
My Morbid wings are jagged
My heart is very frail
My fingernails –claws
It was raining but now its just hail
My teeth are all knotted
My porcelain skin is shattered
You broke me in too.
Its not like I mattered
My necklace is a choker
My bracelet is a killer
My make up is dark
But my life is a thriller
My fishnets are shredded
My eyelashes are blue
Im feeling very angry
And I want to kill you
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Re: Killer
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by quietdaze on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 01:49:20 PM AEST
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| ...but how do you really feel? Very well written, LOTS of real emotion. |
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Re: Killer
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by Gothik_Twitch on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 08:41:54 PM AEST
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How do i really feel??
What the ***** do you think...? i explain it well enuf in the poem. Or so i beleive. |
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Re: Killer
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by adanawa on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 04:57:16 PM AEST
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| Full of emotion, cant relate to that certain thing but close to the wanting to kill part |
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Re: Killer
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by deadbloodyrose on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 08:44:28 PM AEST
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| i love this poem.. AMI JO |
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