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False smile
Contributed by
loopylou
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Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 12:14:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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its funny how the rain will fall
never blowing in time with the wind
no pattern just looking for coincdence
im looking for a safe keeper
somone above all i can trust
to tell savage lies and triva tales of lust
but dont give me some false hope
with "im there for you"
because i dont even want to fall in love
so even if everything goes wrong#
and i break myself apart
it doesnt matter
because id rather hate you
then give you my heart
i am still breathing watch my soul leaving
thats the hurt
you think im so happy
trailing along
but i bet you still dont believe this
when i say it
you think you got it wrong
i dont want you to understand
thats why this ever lasting smile is pro longed
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2004-05-31 12:14:04]
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Re: False smile
(User Rating: 1 )
by Colleen on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 02:48:01 PM AEST
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| Wow, so many people feel this way, and no one says anything. You said it perfectly! Nice writting! |
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Re: False smile
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by adanawa on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 05:00:27 PM AEST
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| I wish I could have explained in that well, I know what you fell but you obviously knew how to put it into words--> |
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