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Undo
Contributed by
broken-glass
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Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 11:40:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Feelings deleted
Forwards repeated
And when engaged in denial
And in struggle to smile,
Rewind and amend
Backtrack and re boot
And when not liking what you say,
Block and ex-hear
Shut off and change gear
Prehistoric your words
Turn the other cheek ignore and unfind
De-learn and de-seek
Pre-see and undo
Assuage and de-view
Renunciate.
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2004-05-31 11:40:06]
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Re: Undo
(User Rating: 1 )
by hooray_its_jen on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 11:48:30 AM AEST
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Five stars, my friend!
Blessings
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Re: Undo
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by alecfernadez on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 03:22:06 PM AEST
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| I liked this, and exspecially the well worded almost computer motif. 5./5 |
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