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Forever Returning
Contributed by
sweet-poison
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Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 10:14:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Scribbled heart diagrams,
Painted with purple ink,
Ruled out by a stray tear,
A name written in pencil lead,
Across a hidden wall,
Reminders of hate, hidden,
Behind a closed door.
Blurry eyed from gazing,
Far too long at the sun,
Not a single blink,
Escapes watery eyes,
I'm forever painting hate,
Upon my memory with care,
With names branded eternally,
To my imaginary wall.
I always write your name,
Repeat it into it's hundreds,
Watch it fall from the lines,
And drip from these pages,
Return to the ink of my pen,
My hate, never-ending,
Drifts and fades,
Constantly returning in floods,
You name will forever scold my tongue.
Copyright ©
sweet-poison
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2004-05-31 10:14:09]
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Re: Forever Returning
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by Kusko on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 09:32:03 AM AEST
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passionate.
I love it.
Great job! |
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Re: Forever Returning
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by whisper-of-night on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 06:55:06 PM AEST
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| Well kay, I must admit, it took me quite few reads to understand this poem, but hey! Once I did, gosh every single lines of it seems so.....hmmm........what is the word for it.......so.........errr...........well, you know what I try to say right?^_^ Hehe well it is definately good, I would rank this as one of your best works! Who say you run out of inspiration?!^_^ |
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