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In Your Reality
Contributed by
night_child
on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 09:10:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You took everything I thought was real
And made it into some kind of fantasy
Like I dreamt up all those times
You told me you wanted me forever
And yet
You made the pain of you leaving
A stinging reality
So painful is my heart
To the touch of any man
Because you broke me
My heart
Smashed it on the floor
I've been sitting here for months
Writing poems from my soul
They speak of tears I've cried
In my reality
Take my life
You've kept so near
End it right here and now
Stop the biting into my tender flesh
Of your fangs
The venom of your lies
I know you're happy now
You've got your new girl
Like you have said
She's so much prettier than me
You don't care how much I hurt
That for months I've been depressed
You just care that your new ****
Can satisfy your lust
You have shown no mercy
To the endless agony I feel
Trapped here
In everything you made
Trapped in your reality
Copyright ©
night_child
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2004-05-31 09:10:10]
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Re: In Your Reality
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by Broken_Skin on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 09:41:18 AM AEST
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| My ex did the same to me, i wrote this.. http://www.your-poetry.com/modules.php?name=News&file=article&sid=25676 (if the link doesnt show up, look for my poem call 'my expression of hatred' i think you might be able to relate very well. x good write. but upsetting x |
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Re: In Your Reality
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by whisper-of-night on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 07:34:51 PM AEST
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| Well well what can I said.....it is very sad what happened to you, and I can sense it in every words you wrote.......well at least now I am glad you find your new love and leave the past behind, enjoy your new reality, that is what I would say.......^_^ |
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