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Potion
Contributed by
humphdj
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Monday, 15th July 2002 @ 10:11:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Sat all alone on a mountain top high
With the best friend that you’ll ever know
Admiring the view and a memory or two
Through your frosted and blurry window
Aren’t you sat with the one who can sooth all your pain?
With a potion that’s sweet to the taste
To look at yourself and to like what you see
Is the medicine, there to be faced?
It works like a charm, or a pick in the arm
Clarifies all the right things to do
You’re never alone and you’ll always come home
To the one you love best, which is you.
Copyright ©
humphdj
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2002-07-15 22:11:21]
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Re: Potion
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by Chrissie on
Monday, 15th July 2002 @ 10:23:39 PM AEST
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So much truth in this...the importance of liking oneself. Much food for thought here Dave
Chrissie x |
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Re: Potion
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by Firefly on
Tuesday, 16th July 2002 @ 01:37:54 AM AEST
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Dave,
I'm watching you. Your works make me smile. |
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Re: Potion
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by Ramfire on
Tuesday, 16th July 2002 @ 02:40:07 AM AEST
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Hi Chrissie,
Enjoyed your poem. My potion is coffee. Maybe I drink too much. I can just see out of that frosted blurry window now.
Always,
Laurie |
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Re: Potion
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by chatabox on
Sunday, 21st July 2002 @ 09:02:35 PM AEST
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and we dont answer ourselves back either do we... well ony to give essential advice.
Super stuff....she said with a lisp. |
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