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Star
Contributed by
peixoto
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Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 08:05:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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I hold your small hands like if was holding the purity of your eyes
and I smile at you, whishing that future days will bring brightness and
brightness
and a star to shine over you, iluminating your eyes forever.
Copyright ©
peixoto
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2004-05-31 08:05:07]
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Re: Star
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by Archie on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 08:06:48 AM AEST
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| This is an awesome poem pure and simple |
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Re: Star
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by peixoto on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 11:44:51 AM AEST
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| Thanks a lot, Archie. |
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Re: Star
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 12:26:00 PM AEST
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This is really lovely.... short and sweet... but says so much...
Jenni |
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Re: Star
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 12:36:42 PM AEST
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This short poem is filled to overflowing with love and devotion. This is beautiful.
Rita |
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Re: Star
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by emystar on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 01:28:09 PM AEST
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Awesomely beautifull write.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Star
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by peixoto on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 07:29:49 PM AEST
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| thank you all for your coments... love to you all... |
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Re: Star
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 04:33:23 PM AEST
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very pretty! hugs n' love nessa
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