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Ill settle for friends
Contributed by
holderofthestone
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Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 07:33:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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todays the day I realize
the day i finally see
how much I really care for you
and that we'll never be
so I now have to say this
even though its oh so hard
Im sorry if it hurts you
and if it leaves you scarred
I tried to let you have me
I tried to be your man
I tried to give you everything
I tried to help you stand
I tried to make you strong
I tried to make you mine
I tried to block them out
I tried to help you find
anything and everything
you ever did desire
and now I sit and watch
my hearts spark expire
Im still not gonna leave
Ill show im not like them
Im always gonna be there
I guess just as friends
I know it wont be simple
the hardest thing to do
I dont know how ill do it,
to fall out of love with you
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Re: Ill settle for friends
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by Silent-No-More on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 07:45:08 PM AEST
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dear, dear holder--- How on earth do you do this?!!?!?!? That honest... that brave... and... that fast!!!!!!!! If anyone knew how fast you wrote this - they'd fall over themselves. It is... as always... incredibly touching, amazingly sweet, and... dare I say, wonderfully different this time.
Still makes me ache - but, in a very good way and still WOWs me. *sigh* Exceptional. |
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Re: Ill settle for friends
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 08:11:29 PM AEST
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well written and so strong
Shari |
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Re: Ill settle for friends
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 08:32:31 PM AEST
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| never settle for anything. she hopefully will come around. another great write. |
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Re: Ill settle for friends
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 08:39:29 PM AEST
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Amazingly sweet and touching...
Keep up the good work..
Jenni |
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Re: Ill settle for friends
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 01:37:26 AM AEST
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WOW...she just can't really see, how much emotion and feeling you have towards her...otherwise she would fall into your arms...I think you are a very great writer...and know how to capture moments...and make them timeless...*hugs*
-Dani |
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Re: Ill settle for friends
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by swiftsouljah on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 10:43:43 PM AEST
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i wrote a poem like this called Friends... and it was the hardest time of my life... the only problem is im still there... great write... i have to go to bed before i drive myself insane
loves a game.... and i obviously put too much of my heart into it.
great job
wayne |
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