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Breaking Free
Contributed by
WorthlesSanity666
on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 03:18:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I want to
break free!!!!
I want to shed my skin,
escape my own body.
My soul's scratching
at the insides,
screaming for someone to
rescue it out of this
pitiful body
that it hates so much.
I hate myself,
along with everyone else.
I wanna get out!
I've tried to
resort to suicide,
but my body's a prison,
my skin is too thick.
Veins bar my windows,
unable to be cut.
I can't think,
I'm too out of limits.
This is pretend,
there's no way
this much anger
could possibly exist!!!
The hatred forms barbwire
wrapped around my body,
discouraging others from
approaching.
I gotta get out!
I have to be freed!!!
I'm so sick of being me!
Copyright ©
WorthlesSanity666
... [
2004-05-30 15:18:29]
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Re: Breaking Free
(User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 04:16:07 PM AEST
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have you seen any one and alked about our feelings?
i've heard that can help some people.
if you ever wanna talk though, i'm here.
don't ever believe that you're alone! |
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Re: Breaking Free
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by Rhei76 on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 06:08:25 PM AEST
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Hey girl,
you doin' alright? I like this one. But what does that say.
I hear what you say, I feel what you voice. It sucks, but At least we have an outlet, and this may seem lame, But atleast we can still read you. Take care. |
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Re: Breaking Free
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by TwEeK on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 04:50:14 PM AEST
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yep, too true, i echo lots of these feelings
i really liked the part where you described your anger as barbed wire wrapping around your body, nice imagery
another amazing poem
tweeky |
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