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Inside these hazle eyes
Contributed by
dark_fighter_chick
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Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 02:13:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I loved you so much that I hate you now,
& I hate you so much that I still love you somehow.
At 1st we were friends, had a crush, made it a big deal.
Grew from friends 2 a crush, you said some s***, now I'm wanting 2 kill.
I gave you my heart, but you didn't giva s***.
you knew i liked you, but but did you even care a bit?
I gave you my soul, you tore it apart, & let it drop 2 the ground.
I put it in a puddle of sorrow, but I couldn't let it drown.
I wanted to kill it, but I just wouldn't die.
I can't get rid of it, no matter how hard I try.
I didn't realize, but it kept burning inside.
I couldn't put it out, & I couldn't hide.
I still like you, & deep in side it's true.
so I'm hopeing that you'll change your mind too.
sadly, thats the way it always is.
it always ends wrong, & sad like this.
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Re: Inside these hazle eyes
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by Shadow on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 09:14:33 PM AEST
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| The way you put it is somwhat comical. I know thats not how it's ment. I like it though and can see the pain behind it. Wow first one to comment. So let's see if i can make it wortht your while. The pain is made vagely vivide. It sorta leaves me wondering but hey I like that. I like it all. I say keep it coming. |
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Re: Inside these hazle eyes
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by Trisha on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 12:51:03 AM AEST
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| I like this |
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