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Why My Life Is So Mucked..
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 02:08:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Well my walls have turned to jelly.
They wobble all the time.
My actions for punching Kelly,
Will never leave my side.
Over a year ago it happened.
And I’ll never regret it once.
But my stuck-up school kicked me out,
And my foster parents went nuts!
But that’s not so bad,
When you think about the fact.
It took me 6 months to find another school,
And this one is crap!
So if any one ever says to you.
To go to helenswood school.
Turn straight round and stick up your nose.
They’ll be nothing for you here at all.
I bunk of all the time.
Or just simply refuse to go.
Then every adult gets all stressed with me,
Or at least, everyone I know.
So hear is what’s wrong with it.
The other pupils have behavioral problems from hell.
The teachers are stuck up ****-holes!
Which helped me to fit in so well!
One of my mates is on drugs,
Another got arrested for possession of a knife.
I was found in her school bag,
LUCKY HER! There goes her life…
I’ve been hit too many-a-time,
To keep a record of which bully did what.
An innocent girl I started as.
I took it, and felt my-self rot.
Now I’ve gone back to being what I was…
And one or two teachers,
They’re o.k.
And one or two pupils,
They aren’t too stained.
But because of the way things had added up,
My brain has crashed.
Things never shut up!
My head feels so mashed.
And I’ve had enough.
But I can’t stop now.
My life is smashed!!
And me and my mate,
Had our rows,
And fell out…
and if it weren't for he mum,
she'd have kicked me out of her house.
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deathdrop
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2004-05-30 14:08:50]
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Re: Why My Life Is So Mucked..
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 04:12:01 PM AEST
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Troubles everywhere, but you can endure....I promise you there are better days ahead! Keep it steady mate.......you're in troubled waters now.......hold it very straight! You think you're life is so mucked up, but you are so better than a year ago........try to think of all the positive things you've done since, and leave all the negativity out of it!
Don't be so down on YOU......try loving yourself and find out you will be much better, I promise you.
Well written poem.......all of your poetry has such feeling......I'm so glad you have your feelings left. They are wonderful to have, I know so many that lost theirs!
Please P.M. me I'd be so glad to help.
love and hugs
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Re: Why My Life Is So Mucked..
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by Hurretje on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 07:45:21 AM AEST
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Impressive and cutting write... I hope you will get all through this and find your way in life. It is very important to choose a path that really suits you and not one that others would like to see you on...
Strength to you!
Hugs,
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