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I Cried
Contributed by
BloodyTears5
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Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 01:13:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I cried myself to sleep
As I let my wrist bleed
I just want to die
It was you who made my cry
Why did you cheat?
You know it would hurt me
You promised to be faithful
Was it all a lie?
I'm going to make it end
Here and now
I grab the blade
I wipe my tears away
I lock the door and sit on the floor
Write the notes to my friends
Saying goodbye and please no to cry
Write my family saying sorry for everything
Turn off the light and lay on my bed
Then grab my bear to hold with my free hand
I take the blade and push down hard to my wrist
There is no turning back now
I have to finish this now
Press it down hard and drag it across
Watch it start to bleed
I start to weep
I close my eyes and let the blood run onto my bed
They find me later
laying in a pool of blood
There is no reason to cry
I was already died
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Re: I Cried
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by krisseee on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 01:15:51 PM AEST
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| dont get messed up by someone who doesnt give a fk |
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Re: I Cried
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 01:18:31 PM AEST
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this made me want to cry.
i hope that you never do any thin like this.
... it was very well put together though.
i like this piece.
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Re: I Cried
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by pixie on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 01:42:37 PM AEST
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This is such a heart wrenching poem, I know it hurts now, but no-one is worth ending your life for,.......
takecare.
Pixie xx |
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Re: I Cried
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 01:43:54 PM AEST
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| I really liked the structure of this poem. the sentiment seemed hard--always seems to blame others for how we feel. |
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Re: I Cried
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 02:45:50 PM AEST
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| Don't kill yourself over someone else. I know it doesn't seem possible now, but you wil eventually get over them! Killing yourself won't make them love you more!!! It's not worth it! I know it sounds like a bunch of crap. But just wait, you'll see. Eventually you'll stop dreaming about them, then you won't think about them everyday, then you justs top thinking about them. Sure, it'll itch for a while, but it will get better. Just hang in there! |
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Re: I Cried
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by diamond_tears on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 06:46:23 PM AEST
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| this was really powerful. the last line made me think that ur soul died wen he/she cheated. so really u were just killing the body. anyway brilliant poem. keep writing it helps!! xxxx |
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Re: I Cried
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by grip-wth-broken-fingers on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 03:08:24 PM AEST
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| excellent poem nice disription and very good words i like it and its got a lot of feeling i know how u feel dont worry xgripx |
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